Posted in Poetry, Uncategorized, Writing, tagged being left, cage, captive, Daily Post, DP Challenge, DPchallenge, Freedom, leaving, poem, poetry, prompt, sad on April 2, 2014| 2 Comments »
The Daily Post‘s Prompt is Leaving.
Freedom
I loved him where my breath was caged,
between the space where truth and desire dwell.
The cell tightened by dimensions,
each inhalation grew my shoulders,
brushed against the cold walls,
knees clasped tight to chest
scraped and bled against concrete,
the unlocked door drew shadow bars
upon my face.
VKF 2014
Posted in Poetry, Uncategorized, tagged poem, poetry, vk, when conceit dies, writing on February 19, 2014| Leave a Comment »
I realized that I haven’t published much of my poetry on my own Blog. Here is a piece of my own work.
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When Conceit Dies
Victoria Kelsey
I.
When conceit dies
I will kneel on her doorstep
grass in my mouth
and beg forgiveness.
II.
This is how battles end,
one adversary walks
trudging weakness
with offerings of plated humility.
III.
Wounds of war are long-lived,
as long as wars themselves
plus decades more;
scars old and whited-over lie
sidelong with seeping fresh cuts.
There is always fighting the day before surrender.
IV.
There are feasts for flies
among the dying yellow grasses.
Wives and mothers wend
from blood-mud to blood-mud
searching freckles and moles
to trace with fingertips.
By these marks they know him.
V.
Faithful lovers,
having no place beside biers,
must lay themselves out on fields
of scarlet poppies, must prostrate
out of earshot of villages and clergy.
Their tears must water blossoms
still living; that their loves may die,
still holding honor,
in absence of the dying blooms
on their graves.
VI.
When conceit dies,
I will wipe my tears
with handfuls of dirt,
I will gather up the reeds
among the blooms,
I will crush them in my palms
until a ball of pain
becomes my breakfast.
VII.
I will kneel upon her step
in silence, unworthy of the knock,
and wait until the breath
of the opening door blows
the pollen from my hair.
Posted in Poetry, tagged fortress, Haiku, healing, hurt, pain, poem, poetry, protection, reed, temperance on January 3, 2014| Leave a Comment »
Temperate words build
crenelated barriers;
a fortress of reeds.
Posted in Poetry, tagged Daily Post, DP Challenge, Haiku, poem, poetry on November 25, 2013| 9 Comments »
For today’s Haiku challenge on the Daily Post:
Wind blowing past graves
Stones leaning in twilight depths
One day for Goodbye
Posted in Poetry, Uncategorized, tagged acceptance, advice, contract, Every Day Poets, mistake, poem, poet, poetry, publish, publishing, submission, submissions, The Open Mouse, writing on November 23, 2013| 6 Comments »
Sometimes, you get some pretty harsh lessons. Let me share one with you, in case you are like myself, and need someone else’s examples of seemingly simple mistakes coming back to haunt them.
I have always been very critical of my own work. I have lived a long life, and have been writing in some form since I was 12 years old. In all that time, I’ve never had the courage to submit anything for publication. Oh, I entered my high school and college writing competitions, and back when poetry.com was a brand spanking new thing, I submitted to them before I knew what they were. But seriously submitting? No, I never had the courage to do it.
Well, I wrote this one piece. And I really loved it. And then I edited it for about two years, with feedback from my core group of editors who have worked with me since the days of rec.arts.poems (Oh, how I miss you, Usenet, and your glory days). One day, in a fit of “If I don’t do it now, I will never do it”, I decided to submit it.
So I checked out a few sites that friends of mine had been published on. I swear I read the submission guidelines, but I read about 6 different website versions of guidelines and must have mixed them up. I thought I only submitted the piece to places that accepted simulataneous submissions. Except, I didn’t.
I was over the moon when I got an acceptance from Every Day Poets, and also from The Open Mouse. I can’t actually remember which accepted first, but they were really close to each other. Their publishing timelines are vastly different, so I was waiting months between the acceptance and the publication. The result was that the piece was published on the fabulous site, The Open Mouse, first. Then approximately 6 weeks later, on Every Day Poets.
Within three days of the publication on Every Day Poets’ website, I was informed that my reading of the submission guidelines was in error, that I was in breach of the contract that I’d signed with Every Day Poets, and given this statement by Kathleen Cassen Mikkelson and the other editors at Every Day Poets:
“As this stands, you are in breach of contract. We have taken your poem down from our site. Additionally, you are no longer eligible to submit to Every Day Poets. We have banned you from the submission system. This was a unanimous decision by our editorial board. We take our contracts seriously and expect our authors to do the same.”
My advice for newly submitting authors and poets:
Do not make a rookie mistake. Read the submission guidelines. Read them again. When you get that acceptance, don’t be so excited by it that you forget to READ THEM AGAIN. As you can see, there is no room for ignorance. The response is harsh. Your mistakes cannot be ameliorated by your inexperience, so be careful.
For me, I think I’ll take a break from submitting for a while. I have plenty of work to keep me busy in other areas of the publishing world. I have always had the most respect for authors who put themselves out there, who take a piece of themselves, create it into something other than themselves, and put it out there for others to examine and critique.
Posted in Poetry, tagged acceptance, Every Day Poets, poem, poetry, publish, published, submission on November 20, 2013| 2 Comments »
It’s my day on Every Day Poets. This is the last of the simultaneous submissions on this piece, all of which were, very surprisingly, accepted.
Transitions 